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Hello World ! It is amazing to communicate with the world, which is not known, which is not seen which is not understood. I am crazy to tell about me everything, one by one. But, not now. Please wait for some time. We would reveal each other, gradually.
To the introduction, let me tell about me very basic information.
My name is – Vrajesh Dave “WIND’ and from India. I like, rather love, to read the world, write my world and meet the people – any type of people- at any place where I can reach.
my one novel in Gujarati is published on free-ebooks net and is titled ‘EK PATANGIYANE PANKHO AAVI’ means ‘A BUTTERFLY GOTS THE WINGS” AND two short stories in English are “THE WHITE SHADOW” AND “REASONS ARE NOT THERE” also available on the same site free-ebooks.net. one more collection of Gujarati short stories is also published there titled “TATHASTU”.
you may connect to me through whatsapp no 0091 94260 41107 and email firstname.lastname@example.org .
please come forward and make the world narrow, bridge the gaps. looking forward.
Vrajesh Dave “Wind”
In the past i encountered with the classic movie titled- THE SOUND OF MUSIC- . today, i encountered with a classic novel – BONDED BY CRIMSON- by a Zrinka Zelic.
A native Croation girl residing in Canada is reflecting in the character of Kate.Is Kate and Zrinka are reflection of each other? or is this a story of Zrinka?
Whatever it be, this is an interesting story to read, to understand and feel.
Author loves all colors, but red is her favorite. the crimson is the color of Blood. the colors of blood dissolved in each others fro Mr. Zrin, Three boys and Kate.
i like to highlight one sentence i liked much
Not a single cloud spoiled the sky. Very interesting !
i love the book and the story. i recommend all of you to read it.
After all “Some rain must fall in everyone’s life.” as told by Zrinka Zelic.
Good luck Zrinka, want more to read from your pen.
Vrajesh Dave Wind, 17/04/2017, Bhuj, India.
The first letter, the first word, the first sentence, the first paragraph, the first page, the first character, the first dialog, the first scene or a first chapter… is very important. The reader judges the whole story from one of these. The reader decides at very first moment of reading that he or she would go further with the story or not. Whether to move further or leave the book aside?
While starting the novel Whispering House by Marci Baun, I judged the book from very first sentence. From very first character Eleanor. The first scene of fog and mist attracted me. While a figure standing on a path just across the creek created a suspense and curiosity for the story.
Marci Baun is able to create scenes full of suspense and interest. Interestingly, I read the story with interest during my free time, even in the bus or train. For some days, it remained my best companion during the travelling.
The erotic scenes were executed very beautifully. The status of Eleanor’s mind was described very well. The whole story moves very smoothly with appropriate pace. The writings of Author Marci Baun are so powerful that I was dragged by the story till end.
I would rate this story at 4.5 out of 5. I wish to read more from her.
By –Vrajesh Dave Wind, Bhuj, 23-03-2017.
THE DATABASE is looking a story , rather a book on text for engineering or networking student. but it is a story, not a text guide.
it starts with a gang of girls who were interested in one night stand. Sabrina introduced a website of database of a male members for one night stand- called INTERNAL SALVATION.
once you show the interest, the site could lead you to the database of male members. you have to rate them all , one by one, after testing him.
Emily, the main character tempted to move further to that site and she registered.
first she tested Jackson, then Joel and on and on. she rated them well.
all these time, she was in command in the game. all fellow male members had to follow her instructions. she called herself THE MISTRESS.
the mistress was all in command for all members’s night.
one twist in the story is that, Emily lost her husband, Stefan and after that she had a treasure of various toys to get orgasm. she succeed too.
one night, she called Sabrina, so called best friend, and both the ladies enjoyed the treasure of joy. the mistress was in command.
finally the mistress meets the Hunter. here, the hunter took the command and the mistress obeyed him. that’s the interesting part of the story.
both, the mistress Emily and the boy Hunter fall in love , the real lov and not a one night stand love. they invited all gang of girls for the party. during the party, Emily found that the site INTERNAL SALVATION was a gimmick by Sabrina and Hunter. Emily ws trapped in the site. but, luckily, hunter was in real love with Emily and hence he decided to close the site. Hunter and Emily end the friendship with Sabrina.
Hunter and Emily were in the apartment, and once again The Mistress was in charge, in command of a male called Hunter.
one interesting part of the story is tht, Emily could achieve the orgasm with toys as well as real shaft. in general, once a person is accustomed with toys, couldn’t feel that intensity.
overall it is a book to read, if you love such erotic frames in the story.
VRAJESH DAVE, BHUJ, 01-03-2017.